WALHT: Write a descriptive paragraph.
As I sink my teeth into the icy cold slice, the light texture melts away like golden syrup on pancakes. A sense of sweetness then kicks though as I bite a chunk of the solid hard chocolate. The thick block drips endlessly on my fingertips turning into liquid and the soggy pink wafers start to fall to pieces.
2 comments:
Kia orana Petuana,
I really liked how you described the ice cream sandwich. It was delicious but very creamy and sweet. This was like what I made in Australia with my Aunty. How did you feel when you first got the ice cream sandwich?
Kia ora Lana,
Well when I first got it I felt like I would get sick because it looked really sweet but I was wrong because it was just right. How about you?
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