Room 11
Glen Innes School
25 September 2015
Dear Ms Parkes,
Thank you so much for helping me with my writing. Since I have been working with you, I have improved a little bit in my writing.
A couple of the things that I have enjoyed working on with you was how I had to describe the video clips that you sent to Mrs Ramkolowan. The video clip that I enjoyed describing was the furious black piranha because we got to write a diamante poem on it and we got to do some art on it. I found that area really fun to work on.
One more thing that I enjoyed doing with you was writing 4x4 poems. Doing that really helped me learn about adjectives, adverbs, verbs and nouns. That really helped me improve more in my writing. I really like doing 4x4 poems because I could use all that I learned from that in my writing.
So, thank you very much Ms Parkes. Your suggestions have been very usefull for me to use. Since I have been working with you I have understood many things that have to do with writing like making good sentences, editing my work to make sure that it makes sense and using a variety of interesting and expensive words to make my work even better.
Yours sincerely,
Petuana
