The Black Piranha
WALT: Write a descriptive paragraph
It was a lovely summers day and a man (George) decided to go out and have an adventure out in the South American rivers. Why did he decide to go there though? Well, george loved the outback and he also loved sea species. One day, a friend told him about the South American rivers and how there were Black Piranhas that lived there. He was fascinated to know that there were Black Piranha’s living there so he decided to go out there and find some.
“ Hmmm, I wonder if the piranhas are here?” questioned George. Then in about 15 minutes after he said that, he saw a creature lurking around his boat. George felt like he was being stalked by someone but then out of no where a black piranha shooted out of no where and George was so fascinated that he called his friends ( Mike and Sarah) and they started to ask him what it looked like, so he started to describe it in a deep voice because he was still so shocked!
“With it’s superb set of strong, sharp and fearsome teeth they are one of the sharpest in the world. It has a very distinctive dark body colour and has rare fire burning red eyes. This fearsome sea creature can bite you in half a second and is cannibalistic, so that means that this creature can and definitely will eat it’s own kind. The Black Piranha hunt’s on it’s own instead of hunting in a pack and they are not afraid to. It is so maneuverable that when it swims, it’s like it’s sprinting in the ocean, as it swurves it’s body side to side. It swims at a very great pace and has a very stocky body like a bulldog. “
After he finished describing it, he then released the piranha and safely went back home with a story to tell his family back at home.
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