Narrative Structure- Note taking

Earlier Last week, I had to complete this reading follow up activity using the book I read. Man and sea. Basically, what I had to do was write down all the parts that you would put in the introduction, Events leading to the problem, the problem and etc. This helped me to revise note taking, which is way easier than writing down a whole paragraph for one thing.

Coma

For reading today, I played this game called “Coma”. In this game, I had to click on the punctuation that would match the sentence like this: His favourite fruits are Apples, Pears and Bananas.Where would you put the punctuation? you would have to put three comma's in between Apples, Pears and Bananas because you are listing the fruits that you like, and when you do that you always put a comma in between.I only got one wrong but that was ok. I really enjoyed playing this game because it was easy. Next time, when I play this game I would like to have more harder sentences.

Reading School Journal

Birthday party 21 March 2014

Hi my name is Petuana and i have been reading this book called birthday party.

from the school journal that you see up above.This story is about a girl named Tana

who was turning ten and that she had been excited ever since 6:00 in the morning. Her mum and dad had been up all night working on the decorations, food and the prizes. Tana’s birthday really meant alot to her because her nan and koro promised that on her 10nth birthday they would give her a special gift and that was a special bone carving with a beautiful swirling shape at the end of the carving like a fern frond.

I really like this book because her gift from nan and koro was really special to her.