What Jack Went Through

WALT: Write a narrative

It was extremely hot, hot enough to fry a complete bacon breakfast. Laughter and Joy quickly spread throughout the neighbourhood when Jack decided to go camping out in the desert. He thought  that it would be a unique experience to go through and because of his love of adventure and imagination. He had a short prickly stubble, loved muted colours and he had the shade of light green eyes.

Soon after Jack had made his decision, he raced up stairs as if he was in a race and pulled his special backpack out of his wardrobe. He then carefully lifted it and placed it onto his bed and started filling it with clothes with excitement. Then Jack was done so he grabbed his suitcase and walked down the stairs with it and placed it down by the door. After a while Jack left and his adventure began.

Jack was super excited! He was as pumped as ever sitting as he was in his car. Then, suddenly  out of nowhere, his car broke down as he was about to take a right turn to his destination. “ Ohh noo!!” He yelled with anger as he whacked his steering wheel like it was a drum. He tried to dial 111 but there was no reception so he grabbed all of his gear out of the boot and took off.

The day felt long. Jack's stomach was rumbling wildly and his legs were aching with anguishing never ending pain. The sun was still shining bright as it beamed on his head. Jack was so tired  that he started to drag his backpack on the soft red sand. “ Help anyone!!” He yelled desperately but no one was in the desert. Jack was just a lone man tramping in the desert. Jack wanted to give up. He wanted to lay on the sand and just die but he thought about all his loved ones. So he motivated himself, thought about positive things and kept moving.

After hours of sweat and tears, the sun started to slowly set. And  jack was still on the move until he spotted a wide yellow thing shining like a light a few miles away. He thought to himself “ What is that?” so he started running towards and as he got close he saw a sign that said “Gas” and he raced to it. “YAY!!!!” he screamed continuously knowing that he was still alive and safe and so he calmly walked towards the worker smelling like the rubbish bin and kindly asked: “ May I have some water please?”