WALT: Write a narrative with focus on a powerful introduction.
“BANG CRASH WO” as i was driving in the sun on the motorway, a big car crash had taken place. Everyone was in such a shock and it took up nearly the whole morning! “but why”? I said in a horrified voice. As the sun was getting hotter I was getting sweaty and i was so happy when the traffic was gone so off i went.
As I was parking up at the parking spaces I remembered about my shopping list so I wrote down all the things that I needed and I went inside. As I was walking inside of the mall I realized that I needed to go to the food store so I took a shortcut and use the elevator. When I was in the elevator quiet music was playing and I decided to check my email so I reached down to get my phone but before I could even grab it I heard a
“ EEK EEK BANG BAM!!” “ OH NO!!”
I yelled but no one heard me so I called for help and luckily I just got a bit of reception and it was enough to call for help so dialed their number and waited for 25 minutes Angry as and I felt like a strong storm and when I feel like that i just want to cry but I couldn't because the people were here and I finally got out so that made my day.
Then, I had to walk up the stairs and that was a bit annoying but I had burnt 2 calories so that was okay. I was finally there and as I walked into the shop I noticed that they did not have what I wanted and that was my favourite salad!! so I asked the salesman if they had any but the man just yelled at me saying
“ Nah, if you can’t find it we don’t have it so GO AWAY”
“ but but you can’t talk to me like that!”
I muttered quietly. But the salesman did not seem to care and he called security and they kicked me out and I was so so so so ANGRY that I started to cry.
Then I saw a shoplifter!He yelled at me saying
“ YOU BETTER KEEP QUIET OR ELSE!!”
and he pulled out a gun but then but i knew i needed to do something so I called the police and they caught him from miles and they told me that I have just captured and witnessed the no.1 shoplifter in the world!! I was stoked and so speechless but very happy at the same time because as a reward the police gave me $1 000,000 and allowed me to get whatever i wanted for free in the mall for 30 days!! I was over the moon and very very happy!
